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Related to my previous picture.

Reading a thread at the MM Legends Station forums about Trigger's past, at the same time I was listening to "One Of Us" from TLK2, spawned this "snapshot" of sorts from a nightmare of his, in the same storyline as the earlier linked picture. In a fanfic that I might write off of it , he starts to realize his past.. Unfortunately, because he's not "one of them", he fears rejection from his friends (and enemies, apparently) because of who he was. Now, that'd never happen, but nightmares don't work that way, do they? *snerk*

The silouhettes, for those who are unfamiliar with the games, are various characters from said series (Tiesel, Tron, Roll, Barrel, and a Servbot to be specific, from left to right). And I know I drew Data rather badly XD; But he was a last minute addition... Roll, however, looks awesome I think, especially for that being the first time I ever drew her, from memory yet...


He is not one of us
He has never been one of us
He is not part of us
Not our kind

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I always thought Trigger's nightmare would have been Roy Rogers trying to shag him... [/generation gap]

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The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.
:iconcbizumi:
Heh, wrong Trigger...

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My hand is on the trigger, I'm ready to ignite
Tomorrow might not make it, but everything's alright
Mental fiction follow me
Show me what it's like to be set free



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An MML picture drawn this year? Impossible. :p

Advanced critique, eh? Not that I'm an advanced critic, but... The composition works well, and the top portion looks great, as far as my eye can tell. The only thing I'd change about the lower portion would be to vary Trigger's lines a little more. Swifty foreshortening on the arm, I'm terrible with it myself.

Poor thing--he must be anxious if he's scared even the servebots won't accept him. :)
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I absolutely LOVE the concept of this.

As for advanced critique...

Roll, being drawn from memory, is a very nice job. But most of there characters are drawn out of Legends style. For example, if you at official artwork, they all look like twigs. Which is hard to remember when drawing legends. I know >_<. . .

Other than that, Trigger's torso and leg armor would have more of an edge, but I think that's it. The shading part is awsome.

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great!! added to favorites! thumbs up!

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